Is the narration really sure that was a day or so?
That really couldn't have been a day or so - it didn't feel like a day or so. Unless someone was really skimping in the 'or so' department. (And they shouldn't do that. It's not nice.)
"Not helping," she chimes, voice sing-songing and wispy, frayed and beginning to waver again. That vague, horrified feeling is attempting to claw its way back up her throat again to strangle her from the inside.
Which, all things considered, might be a blessing.
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Date: 2008-01-10 12:00 am (UTC)That really couldn't have been a day or so - it didn't feel like a day or so. Unless someone was really skimping in the 'or so' department. (And they shouldn't do that. It's not nice.)
"Not helping," she chimes, voice sing-songing and wispy, frayed and beginning to waver again. That vague, horrified feeling is attempting to claw its way back up her throat again to strangle her from the inside.
Which, all things considered, might be a blessing.